Orientation By Aryan

LI: Write an orientation that hooks the reader in.

You will need to explain what happened before the car ended up in the water, who is involved, how they are thinking and feeling, where thi

happened. Your orientation           needs to stop just as the car enters the water.

Today Clayton did not know he was going to have the worst day of

his life. He was speeding across the motorway because his breaks got jammed there was a Warning that said CAUTION ROAD BLOCK GETTING FIXED but Clayton was too busy looking at the breaks and didn’t pay attention to the sign then he accelerated up to a ramp and straight into H20 he swam out and felt so embarrassed of what he had done. he tried to pull his car out with someones car and help. After much tries something happened, something that shouldn’t had happened the person the car belong to’s bumper fell out and the car went right into a bush of tree’s the person said “ohh that was my new car” Clayton replied “My cars my problem you're cars yours” that made the person angry so he called the cops. When they arrived they asked “What's going on here” Clayton told them what happened but they let him go cause the same thing once happened to them he got a warning but again he wasn’t pay attention to the cops much on his poor drowning car.